Ah i just finished chapter 4. very nice n.n; I'd read more, but i have work! I love the way how every chapter is like a mini japanese lesson. It's really cool...And as to what you said about gramatical errors..yes there are a few here and there, But you're doing great! If you ever need a beta, feel free to email me.
that was really great!!!eventhough there are some grammatical errors at least its really great!!!well hope you continue cresting more s/m fanfics,,just love those two!!!!ehehehe,,,^_^ well,ill be seeing you 'round,,,,byerz!!!
WOW! That was azaming! you are one of teh best writers ever!! This piece was awesome! YOu ahve some rtaletalent. I thoml reason i read s5toires frm this site is becuase i find lemon's rpoamntic and sweet. Is taht a little weird? But u ahve some great skills! Dont be self conince and say that you canit do good. kbut u really can! Im sure most of your reviews have must praise like i do to your fic. I cannot wait to read otehr stoires by u! Keep u[ the good work!
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