Switched off the light? But... they don't have electricity, right?
The only other things I could suggest is not having Yuuri (and definitely not Wolfram) saying 'awesome' and have Yuuri be more hesitant or put up more of a fight, though that isnt really necessary.
Very hot stuff. The sex scene was amazing. i think you definitely got their personalities in their actions better than in the dialogue.
Very well done. Keep writing. xxxx
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