That was a good fic I prefer Mokoto and yuri but this was a good het great friswt story but a tip for the sex secnes just go with what feels right i've tried to write like other people but it never worked out just let it flow naturally and thats all I have to say other than hope you post more fics soon
This is only your first fic ever? Its marvelous, A++ without a doubt. I wish you'd reconsider your choice and add more to this fic, definately not one-shot material. It screams for more development :)
Wow!!! I did not think they would be anyone capable of doing a great Keitaro,Kanako lemon but you have proved me wrong. I liked your other fic with those two and Shinobu. I hope you continue on with this fic or at least write one more Keitro,kanako lemon. Continue with the writing and don´t worry about romance. I am only concerned that they´re doing it becuase they love each other or because Kanako wants to fuck her stepbrother. If you do make another lemon with these two have some WAFF in it OK
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