Wow, I like your fic so far.. poor ritsuka! Your dialogue is good and I think your Ritsuka is spot on! I'm glad that your making him older than 14, b/c even that young seems pretty creepy! Can't wait for you to update!
Awww. I can't believe youleft it like that. Now I'm sitting here sniffing. Although it could be a combination of the cold and the way you left your story hanging! I love it please update soon. Don't leave Ritsuka like that for a long time. That's just to mean.
No! Please update soon! I feel sorry for the confused Ritsuka *sniffles*. I'm glad to see that Soubi has some morals, but he better break them soon if he doesn't want to hurt Ritsuka's feelings and risk loosing the popular cutie.
Chpt 2: wow, this story is getting good! I like the tension and issue's you've raised in this chapter! So is Soubi attracted to Ritsuka at all sexually? Maybe not, maybe just that he's his sacrifice like you said eh? Very interesting idea! Please continue soon!
T^T This is so good! I love how in touch you are with Ritsuka's emotions. So angsty, that boy. But we loves him! Oh, and IMO, I don't really think 14 is grounds for shota...but I suppose I can see the need for a warning. ^^; Looking forward to more!
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