I like how we both wrote fics that people can only read if they have seen every subbed KKM episode out there. What are we doing to ourselves? Anyway, I know I've already gushed all over this fic, but it needed to have that done in a public forum too especially since KKM reviewers/readers are few and far between.
I think you handled Conrad's internal struggle versus external display brilliantly. He is a very complicated character who is serious about his duties. I really liked the scene with him and Julia. I can't actually remember seeing another of its kind in the fanfic I've perused. The line about him having her body, soul, and heart was especially poignant and bittersweet since in a way he gets to keep the last two with Yuuri, but not the first. Or perhaps it is just the second. I guess that is the confusion in this kind of pairing. And I don't mean confusion as in you wrote it poorly, but rather that the emotions you are portraying in this fic are extremely complex. As open as Yuuri is, he is also hard to read when it comes to matters like this in the anime.
Your writing was beautiful and the concept was well executed! I hope you venture further into Kyou Kara Maou writing. I know I'll read it at least.
this is very good, and im glad to see some kkm fics on this site. i know this is a one shot, but u should consider a sequal down the line - maybe in a few years, and have yuri really get together with conrad, but only if you can do it in a way that dosnt hurt wolfram too bad since wolfram is my favorite character. *smile* anywya, thank you for writing this and please continue to write more kkm fics, you are a very good writer just like the other author in this category. if only the other anime categories had such talent, but unfortunatley most of the stuff on this site is dribble. thank you.
This was a good story. I am curious they only have available right now is to chapter 5 in english. Where can a person go in order to purchase the other ones leading up to episode 41? I think this is a cute story and would like to see all of the story.
Just a note. I noticed the reviewer 'pinks' only leaves comments to trash the pairing and doesnt really seem to judge the fic by ite merits. I hope you dont get discouraged by twats like her (yeah, pinks, you're a shallow stupid twat. look it up). Oh and I think its a bonus that the first fic in this site for this anime happens to be a Conrad/Yuuri, and a good one at that.
That's exactly how i feel about Conrad & Yuuri. They were more than mentor & disciple, more than master & soldier, more than senpai & kouhai, more than baseball buddies.
I cannot ignore the yaoi-ness in them. It's so obvious the way they look at each other & look into each other's eyes.
OMG can u develop it into a one-shot lemon or a short story about how they end up together?
Please Please... love to see this come true.
(P/S: i am more of a Conrad x Yuuri supporter than a MuraYuuri or WolfYuuri supporter. )
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