What a sweet lemon -- I loved it! Sano was perfect, just the right touch of humor to balance out the romance of this story, and the sex was touching (if you'll pardon the pun). ;) What a great image -- Kaoru crawling into bed with Kenshin wearing nothing but a hair ribbon and a smile, and Kenshin thinking she is delirious with fever!
I think I know who you are!!! Not in person that is but I wonder if I am write in assuming that IT is You who wrote that magnificent story on FF.net...Ronin Kaoru!! I LOVE THAT STORY!! I am assuming the big bad block got ya? It is a very sad thing indeed, I was so looking forward to the deal with Shishio...Of course, I imagine changing the whole Rurouni Kenshin History has to be more than a bit difficult. Esspecially since there are all those other worldly celestial creatures that have helped mess it up even more..Poor Kenshin. Lost in the world no matter how you put it and not even Kaoru could save him from the loss of Love and the mess of the Hitokiri...
Anyway, I really enjoyed the Lemon session here, however, I am concerned. It seemed to me that you didn't finish this fic. I got a little confused in the middle...One minute we are in a conversation with Megumi, Tae and Sano and then K/K are beginning their love dance...did I miss something? Plus there are alot of errors, forgotten words, misspellings and various other gramatical problems. This is NOT a flame. I do like your writting style very much but it just seems that you are not displaying your usually fantastic literary art abilities in THIS fic. I know that AFF.net is terribly unreliable and that to err is human so... I'm just saying that with a good ole sit down edit this would be another one of your fantastic stories.
I hope you keep up the great work! Let me know if there's anything I can do to help.
~De Lazy Lady Lime
I don't know if you've noticed or been informed but for about a week or so there's been a large chunk of the middle of your story missing on this site. I'd really appreciate it if you checked that out. I'd be overjoyed if you'd fix it.
*scratches head* ummmm. . . I think there is a part missing. . . I'm confused. . .*groans hitting head repeatedly on a wall* God I think I should just go to bed. . . Good fic. . . I'm sure the part I missed was good too.
AdultFanFiction.Net is not in any way associated with or related to FanFiction.Net
The views, activities, and lifestyles portrayed in these fictional not-for-profit stories in no way reflect the opinion, activities, or lifestyle of the WebMasters or the majority of the AFF Community. Each original story's copyright is held by the Author of the story and you should contact that Author with any questions or comments on their work. The WebMasters are not responsible for any of the content found in our archives.
The WebMasters always reserve the right to delete (or not) anything at their whims, but especially in the case of purposely inflammatory stories or non-fiction posts, trolling and/or inflammatory Author/User/Troll accounts. By entering these Archives you are stating that you are 18 years of age or older and that you are allowed to view adult material in your area. If you are underage or if Adult Material offends you, please Go Elsewhere.