Your use of simile and metaphor are superb! The "dancing fire" and "soft suede" lines are powerful and marvelous. I paused and reread them several times....amamzing.
The story itself if rather good. Normally, I am uncomfortable with Goku in sexual situations, you however brought the man out of the "child". Excellenrk. rk.
*tears up before glomping author* Thank you for continuing!!!! I love it! It's a different take on things, and Goyjo and Goku together @_@ You've made me a very happy hentai ^_^ You gotta keep going though, you must!! I'll give you cookies! Cookies and Plushies!!!!! *cackles* There is nothing wrong with bribing an author, especially when they write so well! I love your descriptions, and I love that even though it's wonderfully smutty there is still some introspectiveness (is that even a word?) Anyway, I just wanted to say I love this story! Gotta have Sanzo and Goku-ness now *bounces off*
This was great and should DEFINATELY be continued!!! As much as I love 3x9 and 8x5, I absolutely loved this... PLEASE keep it up! You write so wonderfully!
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